While the usual dose of short stories compose of lengthy paragraphs and chapters that never seem to end, the real challenge lies in achieving extremes: the longest and the shortest.
Ernest Hemmingway was challenged to write a short story using only six words. This is what he came up with: "For sale: baby shoes, never used." Now you can see how a few powerful words can create a world of stories.
The challenge is this: think up of six words that can be weaved into one such story. Remember, it should communicate a central thought and should be understood by the reader. Now, that's a challenge!
Here're some more examples to keep you thinking:
- Irvine Welsh: "Eyeballed me, killed him. Slight exaggeration."
- Robert Olen Butler: "Saigon hotel. Decades later. He weeps."
- Norman Mailer: "Satan--Jehovah--fifteen rounds. A draw."
- Tobias Wolff: "She gave. He took. He forgot."
- David Lodge: "I saw. I conquered. Couldn't come."
- Augusten Burroughs: "Oh, that? It's nothing. Not contagious."
He apologized. He left. Look back.
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Love me? Yes, but not tonight.
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Come take a stand. Right now.
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Promise me this. Don't come back.
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I can't say. I'll try again.
=))
Words of Wisdom from the heart. =P
ReplyDeleteLul. =P
ReplyDeletemeron na ako sa multiply ko! pinagaralan namin to for cw100 :D
ReplyDeletemeron si ernest hemingway ba yun? "baby shoes for sale, never used."
haha ganto sya For Sale: Baby Shoes. Never Worn.
ReplyDeletetska basahin mo yung narrative ni JM, nakalagay na sya.
Oo nga naman nicai, magbasa! =))
ReplyDeleteA Song Playing. You and Me.
ReplyDeletehaha wala lang
ReplyDeleteTogether is Fun. With Others: Strangers.
ReplyDeleteI wrote a "sais" once. Yeah.
ReplyDelete"I love you." Yeah, right. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteO, uma-Unrequited Love ka na naman e! :))
ReplyDelete10:01AM, Goodbye. 10:02 AM, crash. One minute.
ReplyDeletehhaha i love it!
ReplyDeleteIts 3am. You and I collide.
ReplyDeleteTurn back time. I miss you.
ReplyDeleteay sabi ko nga! :)) syempre tinignan ko lang yung nakalista!
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure either. Forget it.
ReplyDeleteAng lalim lang ng mga pinanghuhugutan mo. =)) Grand Canyon? =P
ReplyDeleteextension ng unrequited love thread?
ReplyDelete"Happy?" "No, Cause You're not here."
ReplyDeleteForced smile. Sudden tears. I fail.
ReplyDeleteMuhahahaha. =))
ReplyDeleteFor more, hindi lang Grand Canyon, Bud.
ReplyDeleteNigara Falls. Rumaragasa, tuloy-tuloy, hindi maawat. :))
Eh ang Grand Canyon, tuyot na remnants ng nakaraan. XD
If only you're here. I was.
ReplyDeletemay running water naman sa Grand Canyon? =)) Talagang dineffend.
ReplyDeleteI was there first. You're late.
ReplyDeleteYou didn't. I cried, too. Inside.
ReplyDeleteI saved the world from cavities!
ReplyDeleteWith the help of Colgate... Total!
ReplyDeleteXD Pati 'to pinatulan!
But it's impossible. Let it be.
ReplyDeleteFine. Ikaw nang nakatira sa Grand Canyon. XD
ReplyDeleteI can't. Impossible is a lie.
ReplyDeleteEmpty Room. Darkened Lights. Sparks flew.
ReplyDeleteAren't everything lies? Face the music.
ReplyDeleteQuick to disappear, sparks die quietly.
ReplyDeleteThe truth is I love you.
ReplyDeleteAyon. Parang YM lang. Real time! XD
ReplyDeleteBut the music plays on, alright.
ReplyDeleteTeka, teka, teka..
ReplyDeleteDan, alam ko ba 'to?!?!
Music drowns the noises and lies.
ReplyDeleteThe truth is overrated. So yeah.
ReplyDeleteAko alam ko. Ata. Uh, Dan?
ReplyDeleteTotoong Comment: BENTA! Ang galing! Hands down, this is good.
ReplyDeleteReply: My truths are always overrated. Sadly.
Music we make, bodies entwined. Bang!
ReplyDeletepag reply lang, dapat ba sais?
ReplyDeleteoooh this i like! ginagawa niyo ni ayrie na sagutan e haha!
ReplyDeleteWe kill ourselves with uncontrolled passions.
ReplyDeleteTotoong totoong comment: hahahaha salamat!
ReplyDeleteReply: Keep 'em coming. My closet's empty.
Ewan ko. Pwede siguro mas marami. XD
ReplyDeleteNo. I see ghosts in them.
ReplyDeleteA river of emotions. I drown.
ReplyDeletehaha oo jm. sorry ayrie.. =)
ReplyDeleteAre you afraid to come in?
ReplyDeleteYou're crying. It's just a dream.
ReplyDeleteOnly when you're not around.
ReplyDeleteLove is but a selfish dream.
ReplyDeleteI'm never around. I guess not.
ReplyDeleteA nightmare, or so it seems.
ReplyDeleteYou wake up. Everything just stops.
ReplyDeleteYou're just hiding. I'm still looking.
ReplyDeleteA dream that won't come true.
ReplyDeleteAnd you find that you're alone.
ReplyDeleteSide by side yet so oblivious.
ReplyDeleteSometimes peripheral vision is not enough.
ReplyDelete1:37am. Sleep beckons the prince. Night!
ReplyDeletePrince, my ass. Good night, Dreamer. =))
ReplyDeleteeven though you're near, i'm alone.
ReplyDeleteLife's not a game. Grow up.
ReplyDeleteYun yun e. :))
ReplyDeleteIf you know how, teach me.
ReplyDeleteAKALA KO BA MATUTULOG KA NA?! :))
Move over, bitch. Prince is here. XD
ReplyDeleteXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
(Design yan, hindi maraming hugs and kisses)
Gossip Boy
You stop me from doing so.
ReplyDeleteI'm no teacher, merely a dreamer.
ReplyDeleteI'm a bitch. Live with it. XD
ReplyDeleteWell you speak like one, sometimes.
ReplyDeleteAfter all I've done for you?!
ReplyDeleteExactly my point. You're always there.
ReplyDeleteTalk is not walk, old folk.
ReplyDeleteBut all you did were games.
ReplyDeleteYet you say I never cared.
ReplyDeleteI'm just looking for answers, too.
ReplyDeleteI never made such a claim.
ReplyDeleteYes you are, bitch. Bitch, bitch!
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHA SERYOSO NA TALAGA. BABU. Nobela na tong nagawa natin. Bravo!
I say it once again: XOXO.
Ako rin! Seryoso na. Anak ng...
ReplyDeleteI am sleeping my dear friends.
ReplyDeleteYou say it with such conviction. XD LOLz.
ReplyDeletePanicky voice. Gun shot. Kumiko? Kumikooooooo!
ReplyDelete(kailangan mabagal talaga yung last word kasi pang-movies yan eh.)
Hands wondering. "Are you sure?" "Yes."
ReplyDeleteBrown envelope. Big smile. "Hi!" Heartbeats.
ReplyDeleteoh freak this is nice. pero diba wandering dapat? instead of wondering? =)
ReplyDeleteyeah pero gusto ko magplay of words lang. wondering= hands having a mind of its own- having the ability to wonder..
ReplyDeleteshet. hindi ba yun conceivable :'(
natatawa pala ako na tayong mga interns ay puro online :p
ReplyDelete*pretends to work* :))
ReplyDeletegusto ko pa rin yung kay anj.
ReplyDeleteOJT= on the job texting
HAHAHA! Okay, this one's definitely SOLD! XD
ReplyDeletehahaha trulili
ReplyDeletePasintabi kay Hemmingway.
ReplyDeleteFor sale: Teenage heart, very worn.
=P
I second! :))
ReplyDeleteOkay, so 100 comments na 'to. O_o
ReplyDeleteDy, dy, bilhin ko na, pwede? ♥ *huuuuuug!*
hahaha magkano? =P
ReplyDeletehaggard, na-third page ko na. hahaha.
ReplyDeleteIkaw bahala. Kahit magkano. :))
ReplyDeletehahaha blank cheque? ayun yun eh.
ReplyDeleteHameigh. :D
ReplyDeleteAMPOTAH nito dan. tagos.
ReplyDeleteOh God. Help me move on.
ReplyDeleteHow can I not love you?
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What do I tell my heart?
-pasintabi kay Joy Enriquez
I nominate JM for Candy cutie.
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHAHAHA. Ano, JM, game?! :p Nakakaloka naman ito. Mas mahirap ang word choice kapag smaller form (aba, may natututunan ako sa CW!). Each one of those six words carries 17% of the story! Kaya next time na ako magpopost ng maayos na kwento. Haha.
(Edit: Wag ka maflatter masyado JM, hindi ikaw ang crushie ko. Hahahaha! ;p)
haaay huhay talaga. tae. dalawang beses na kasi nangyari sakin to. isang taon pagitan.. parehong tao.
ReplyDeleteHearts! :D
ReplyDeleteandaming comment.habol ako.
ReplyDeletered stain.coughed blood.smoking kills.
:)
lotsa hearts up for bidding. haha.
ReplyDeleteoooh naghahanap na ba kayo ng candy cuties? text mo ko pag may pupunta tapos punta ko sa cubicle ninyo :))
ReplyDeletewhite shirt. other girl. coffee stain.
ReplyDeleteTumigil ang mundo ko dito. Wahahahaha. SAN NANGGALING YUN??!!!
ReplyDeletekamusta naman to, di alam kung saan ka nagreact :)
ReplyDeleteSorry naman. Andaming Nazi!!! =))
ReplyDeleteSorry naman. Andaming Nazi!!! =))
ReplyDeleteTumigil ang mundo ko dito! WAHAHAHA! San nanggaling yun???!
ReplyDeleteOy seryoso ako ha. Email mo ko ng best pictures mo. Hehehe!
ReplyDeleteSige nga, opinion survey. Sinu-sino in favor of nominating JM for Candy Cuties? Hehe!
Dyan, May mamimili. Ewan ko pa kung pupunta talaga sila sa office. Sana. Hahahaha! Text kita! ;p
Haggard to! Papatayin ako ng kapatid ko! Die-hard candy fan yun eh! Hahahahaha pakshet ka micah pinapatawa mo ko nang bonggang bongga. =))
ReplyDeleteTalaga? Coolness! Sabihin mo asa Council of Cool ako. Check nya Dec 2007 issue. Hahahaha.
ReplyDeleteSige tawa ka lang. Pag sinubmit ko talaga pictures mo ako naman ang tatawa. =))
SIGE ZHEY-EHM AND AY. PARANG MALAMAN NA YANG MGA 6 WORD STORY NIYO. GAWD. :X
ReplyDelete~i profess. you listened. i cried.
ReplyDeletethink i didn't even make sense. :o
um, i call these "the bathroom diaries" lols. ;-)
ReplyDelete1> Once a day. Still overweight. Overdosed. Over.
2> Locked cubicle. Unload. Uncertain. De-throned. Fired.
3> Pale lipstick. Re-touch. Bittersweet dab. Re-retouch.
bubuhayin namin ito ni penny, bwahahaha.
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hey JM, kamusta na, candy cutie? :)
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on sale: school readings. barely used.
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where do i go from here?
must-see: renzie, the curious monkey.
ReplyDeletepathetic, really. his skills were ripe.
hordes of zombies, they were everywhere.
you love me? sure you do.