Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Literary Challenge: Six-Word Short Stories

Let's keep our creative juices flowing this summer!

While the usual dose of short stories compose of lengthy paragraphs and chapters that never seem to end, the real challenge lies in achieving extremes:  the longest and the shortest.

Ernest Hemmingway was challenged to write a short story using only six words.  This is what he came up with:  "For sale: baby shoes, never used."  Now you can see how a few powerful words can create a world of stories.

The challenge is this:  think up of six words that can be weaved into one such story.  Remember, it should communicate a central thought and should be understood by the reader.  Now, that's a challenge!

Here're some more examples to keep you thinking:
  • Irvine Welsh: "Eyeballed me, killed him. Slight exaggeration."
  • Robert Olen Butler: "Saigon hotel. Decades later. He weeps."
  • Norman Mailer: "Satan--Jehovah--fifteen rounds. A draw."
  • Tobias Wolff: "She gave. He took. He forgot."
  • David Lodge: "I saw. I conquered. Couldn't come."
  • Augusten Burroughs: "Oh, that? It's nothing. Not contagious."
Here's my first try:  Upstairs Room.  Footsteps.  Screams.  Sixth Sense.

128 comments:

  1. He apologized. He left. Look back.
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    Love me? Yes, but not tonight.
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    Come take a stand. Right now.
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    Promise me this. Don't come back.
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    I can't say. I'll try again.

    =))

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  2. Words of Wisdom from the heart. =P

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  3. meron na ako sa multiply ko! pinagaralan namin to for cw100 :D

    meron si ernest hemingway ba yun? "baby shoes for sale, never used."

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  4. haha ganto sya For Sale: Baby Shoes. Never Worn.
    tska basahin mo yung narrative ni JM, nakalagay na sya.

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  5. Oo nga naman nicai, magbasa! =))

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  6. Together is Fun. With Others: Strangers.

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  7. "I love you." Yeah, right. Sigh.

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  8. O, uma-Unrequited Love ka na naman e! :))

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  9. 10:01AM, Goodbye. 10:02 AM, crash. One minute.

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  10. ay sabi ko nga! :)) syempre tinignan ko lang yung nakalista!

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  11. Ang lalim lang ng mga pinanghuhugutan mo. =)) Grand Canyon? =P

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  12. extension ng unrequited love thread?

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  13. "Happy?" "No, Cause You're not here."

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  14. Forced smile. Sudden tears. I fail.

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  15. For more, hindi lang Grand Canyon, Bud.

    Nigara Falls. Rumaragasa, tuloy-tuloy, hindi maawat. :))
    Eh ang Grand Canyon, tuyot na remnants ng nakaraan. XD

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  16. may running water naman sa Grand Canyon? =)) Talagang dineffend.

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  17. I saved the world from cavities!

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  18. With the help of Colgate... Total!

    XD Pati 'to pinatulan!

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  19. Fine. Ikaw nang nakatira sa Grand Canyon. XD

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  20. Empty Room. Darkened Lights. Sparks flew.

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  21. Aren't everything lies? Face the music.

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  22. Quick to disappear, sparks die quietly.

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  23. Ayon. Parang YM lang. Real time! XD

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  24. But the music plays on, alright.

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  25. Teka, teka, teka..
    Dan, alam ko ba 'to?!?!

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  26. The truth is overrated. So yeah.

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  27. Totoong Comment: BENTA! Ang galing! Hands down, this is good.

    Reply: My truths are always overrated. Sadly.

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  28. Music we make, bodies entwined. Bang!

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  29. oooh this i like! ginagawa niyo ni ayrie na sagutan e haha!

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  30. We kill ourselves with uncontrolled passions.

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  31. Totoong totoong comment: hahahaha salamat!

    Reply: Keep 'em coming. My closet's empty.

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  32. Ewan ko. Pwede siguro mas marami. XD

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  33. You wake up. Everything just stops.

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  34. You're just hiding. I'm still looking.

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  35. Sometimes peripheral vision is not enough.

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  36. 1:37am. Sleep beckons the prince. Night!

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  37. Prince, my ass. Good night, Dreamer. =))

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  38. even though you're near, i'm alone.

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  39. If you know how, teach me.

    AKALA KO BA MATUTULOG KA NA?! :))

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  40. Move over, bitch. Prince is here. XD

    XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
    (Design yan, hindi maraming hugs and kisses)

    Gossip Boy

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  41. I'm no teacher, merely a dreamer.

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  42. Well you speak like one, sometimes.

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  43. Exactly my point. You're always there.

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  44. Yes you are, bitch. Bitch, bitch!

    HAHAHAHA SERYOSO NA TALAGA. BABU. Nobela na tong nagawa natin. Bravo!

    I say it once again: XOXO.

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  45. You say it with such conviction. XD LOLz.

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  46. Panicky voice. Gun shot. Kumiko? Kumikooooooo!

    (kailangan mabagal talaga yung last word kasi pang-movies yan eh.)

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  47. Hands wondering. "Are you sure?" "Yes."

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  48. Brown envelope. Big smile. "Hi!" Heartbeats.

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  49. oh freak this is nice. pero diba wandering dapat? instead of wondering? =)

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  50. yeah pero gusto ko magplay of words lang. wondering= hands having a mind of its own- having the ability to wonder..

    shet. hindi ba yun conceivable :'(

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  51. natatawa pala ako na tayong mga interns ay puro online :p

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  52. gusto ko pa rin yung kay anj.

    OJT= on the job texting

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  53. HAHAHA! Okay, this one's definitely SOLD! XD

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  54. Pasintabi kay Hemmingway.

    For sale: Teenage heart, very worn.

    =P

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  55. Okay, so 100 comments na 'to. O_o

    Dy, dy, bilhin ko na, pwede? ♥ *huuuuuug!*

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  56. haggard, na-third page ko na. hahaha.

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  57. hahaha blank cheque? ayun yun eh.

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  58. How can I not love you?

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    What do I tell my heart?

    -pasintabi kay Joy Enriquez

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  59. I nominate JM for Candy cutie.

    HAHAHAHAHAHA. Ano, JM, game?! :p Nakakaloka naman ito. Mas mahirap ang word choice kapag smaller form (aba, may natututunan ako sa CW!). Each one of those six words carries 17% of the story! Kaya next time na ako magpopost ng maayos na kwento. Haha.

    (Edit: Wag ka maflatter masyado JM, hindi ikaw ang crushie ko. Hahahaha! ;p)

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  60. haaay huhay talaga. tae. dalawang beses na kasi nangyari sakin to. isang taon pagitan.. parehong tao.

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  61. andaming comment.habol ako.

    red stain.coughed blood.smoking kills.

    :)

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  62. lotsa hearts up for bidding. haha.

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  63. oooh naghahanap na ba kayo ng candy cuties? text mo ko pag may pupunta tapos punta ko sa cubicle ninyo :))

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  64. white shirt. other girl. coffee stain.

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  65. Tumigil ang mundo ko dito. Wahahahaha. SAN NANGGALING YUN??!!!

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  66. kamusta naman to, di alam kung saan ka nagreact :)

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  67. Sorry naman. Andaming Nazi!!! =))

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  68. Sorry naman. Andaming Nazi!!! =))

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  69. Tumigil ang mundo ko dito! WAHAHAHA! San nanggaling yun???!

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  70. Oy seryoso ako ha. Email mo ko ng best pictures mo. Hehehe!

    Sige nga, opinion survey. Sinu-sino in favor of nominating JM for Candy Cuties? Hehe!

    Dyan, May mamimili. Ewan ko pa kung pupunta talaga sila sa office. Sana. Hahahaha! Text kita! ;p

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  71. Haggard to! Papatayin ako ng kapatid ko! Die-hard candy fan yun eh! Hahahahaha pakshet ka micah pinapatawa mo ko nang bonggang bongga. =))

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  72. Talaga? Coolness! Sabihin mo asa Council of Cool ako. Check nya Dec 2007 issue. Hahahaha.

    Sige tawa ka lang. Pag sinubmit ko talaga pictures mo ako naman ang tatawa. =))

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  73. SIGE ZHEY-EHM AND AY. PARANG MALAMAN NA YANG MGA 6 WORD STORY NIYO. GAWD. :X

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  74. ~i profess. you listened. i cried.

    think i didn't even make sense. :o

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  75. um, i call these "the bathroom diaries" lols. ;-)

    1> Once a day. Still overweight. Overdosed. Over.

    2> Locked cubicle. Unload. Uncertain. De-throned. Fired.

    3> Pale lipstick. Re-touch. Bittersweet dab. Re-retouch.

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  76. bubuhayin namin ito ni penny, bwahahaha.
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    hey JM, kamusta na, candy cutie? :)
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    on sale: school readings. barely used.
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    where do i go from here?

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  77. must-see: renzie, the curious monkey.

    pathetic, really. his skills were ripe.

    hordes of zombies, they were everywhere.

    you love me? sure you do.

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